Is this a good beginning rap?

yo check it listen to me spit it I aint the type to hit it and quit it/ I go hard and Im goin all the way sometimes life displays disarray/ Lets get one thing straight as I go through the gate/ I aint no hood get this understood come from a good neighborhood/ So let me bust this rhyme you'll never see me behind bars serving time/ Im just a lover of rap but not the gangster lifestyle some of my friends be mistaken for a pedifile/ Im breaking out with loads of audacity your gonna see me pushing the boundries of human capacity/ Im tall and skinny my girl is sweet and pretty/ Dont mess with me or rock me the wrong way if you do on the ground you will be laid/ See Im not a thugbut Im fresh and new just like a new discovered rain forest bug call me slug/ I want his fame our lives should switch if your having girl troubles go watch the movie hitch/ I only want heteroual women last name Griffin I'll leave your head spinnin/ remember the name as I climb the ranks to fame/ Rappin all night you see a bright light you'll know it's me in the distant sight/ So take your pill I bet you will Vitamin c to boost ones immunity/ Im comin from every angle clear as can be cant you see/ No difference between us sep you sittin there lookin like a big star heart and dedication will get me far/ 1 left oh look I just struck par/ my step mom checked into another bar/ Charging up like a lightening bolt I reach the peak at 30 million volts/ This is all I want so here I go give you VIP pes to my show